I was a pupil in Uru Mānuka and this blog is where I shared my learning.
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Friday, 28 September 2018
Quality blog comment
over the last two week we have creating a slideshow to teach other how to write a quality blog comment. You must say something that they have to work on. and something positivist.What I found challenging making all of the slide.
Hi Brooklan, Hannah here. I like the way you put speech bubbles. It reminds me of when I made animations. Next time could you please make your own cars and backgrounds. Why does it turn to night at Burger King.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say. Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about.
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Hi Brooklan, Hannah here. I like the way you put speech bubbles. It reminds me of when I made animations. Next time could you please make your own cars and backgrounds. Why does it turn to night at Burger King.
ReplyDeleteThank you Hannah for the great comment
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